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Overgrown With Vines

Overgrown With Vines Three meatless, boney, fingers clawed at the hard dirt, glistened in the emptiness, cursed the damnation of the full moons lie. Death and the shallow grave had come quickly a sharp metal edge the instrument of both. The vines, the ever growing, ever reaching strangling vines had come much slower, clutching and grasping the remnants of an unexamined death. He had fought them, the vines, struggled to raise a hand, to signal the intruders of his silent hell. Slowly he succumbed to his fate gave up the ghost of justice delayed relaxed into the dirt and stone accepted the anonymity of a life the ignominy of a death overgrown with vines. 9/29/2016 submitted to – Overgrown With Vines – Poetry Contest sponsor – Broken Wings

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Date: 10/14/2016 11:09:00 AM
Just dropping by to say congrats on your winning work..Good to see you in the winners' list..Sara
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Date: 10/10/2016 1:07:00 PM
A great write John, acceptance of the horrible wrong that had befallen him. It leaves me wondering if the dead can ever give up.
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Date: 10/10/2016 10:18:00 AM
John, congratulations on your win in my contest ~
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:32:00 AM
oh John, "accepted the anonymity of a life the ignominy of a death"...wow- powerful stuff here, congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/2/2016 4:53:00 PM
Sad murder story..Creative way to go..Reads like a winner for the contest..Thanks for stopping by my page..Sara
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Date: 10/1/2016 4:54:00 PM
Such dark creepy intense imagery John I feel quite chilled reading these lines:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/30/2016 11:47:00 AM
Excellent entry John, best wishes...
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