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Over the Edge

His suicide note made it plain That he could no longer cope with the pain And the tears in his eyes told the tale Of a life filled with sorrow's travail He felt he could no longer maintain Depression drove him over the edge Now he stood on a narrow ledge Ready to make the leap of death Ready to take his last breath Suddenly he made the leap And landed with a thud on a jeep But his heart still had a beat As paramedics rushed to treat him Then to the hospital he was rushed His dream of dying now crushed His family gathered round his hospital bed So relieved that he wasn't dead But the doctor's words were clear He would spend the rest of his life in a wheelchair The tears in his eyes told the tale Of a suicide attempt that failed Though he could not walk again A second chance at life he gained

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Date: 9/10/2013 5:43:00 PM
Great story of suicide told in poetic form..Sad that this happens in life..I know of several that attempted and lived but I also know of some who were successful..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Date: 8/21/2013 8:54:00 PM
Sadness is always left behind, prickly thorns in the rose bushes of Life. Depression cuts deep in the soul and as you poem says, it seldom turns out well.
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Date: 8/6/2013 6:46:00 PM
Sad sad ...Joseph but well written...congratulations
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Date: 8/5/2013 8:09:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations... xox..Linda
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Joseph May
Date: 8/6/2013 6:33:00 AM
thank you Linda
Date: 7/28/2013 5:51:00 PM
Great write, though terribly sad, is this poem, Joseph...suicide is such a heavy topic to write about...Kudos for writing it so well. Have a great week! Always, Annalise
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Joseph May
Date: 7/29/2013 5:23:00 AM
thank you so much Annalise
Date: 7/26/2013 8:49:00 PM
Some things are worse death
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Joseph May
Date: 7/29/2013 5:20:00 AM
thanks Richard

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