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Over Flow

Do you know what it feels like when you say you love me but you love them more, despite them never being there and hurting you. You are blunt with me acting like you just hugged me, instead of the blow to my heart. I am tired of putting up with you waiting for this to pass. It's not the first time you've done this but thats the old me you say as you laugh it off, but there is no grin on my face. I still wait for the real you but I am getting restless I am a glass of water and you keep pouring more water. Someday, I am going yo over flow. Then you can go back to all your little friends who don't really care and ditch you but you don't really care about me so it seems. An overflow is coming, get ready for the fight that I have prepared for.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/22/2010 5:15:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Violet. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 12:09:00 PM
i loved the flow of words and the outpouring of emotion in this poem. keep up the good work.
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Date: 6/21/2010 11:39:00 AM
very nice build-up to a boiling point. kill him with kindness and go for a brisk walk. he isn't worth you. - Alan
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