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Over and Done

I hear the mournful cry of a loon and the waves hitting the land. I carry my shoes as I walk on the dune, my toes warmed by the feel of the sand. All thoughts of you, from my mind, banned. A broken heart just needs fresh air and time to grieve in the sun. To convince myself I no longer care, that romance is now over and done and from your memories its now time to run.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/16/2017 10:04:00 PM
Heartbreak hurts until it heals. This is very moving Francine! : )
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Date: 7/13/2017 7:52:00 AM
I guess you posted your quintain on the same day I did. I love your first line; it sets your stage nicely.
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