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Outter Limit Pt2

i lie here hopin 2 lay the blame feelin the ache and all of the pain full of hate and disbelief up all night knowin i'm not gona get no no relief cuz i own all the questions and the needing to know why but... it wasn't me who delivered the lie or was it... thats how it makes me feel damn ryt i got the raw end of the deal hurt, hatred, humiliation all side effects of your creation no meeting of minds no mutual respect just deciet and neglect always left with this trapped in this deep dark abyss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/18/2010 7:54:00 AM
good poem, I enjoyed reading it today.
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Date: 11/16/2010 3:50:00 AM
I like this one..Don't know if the misspelled words and slang is part of the style of the work or not..I escpecially like the last seven lines..I was delighted that you stopped by my work "The Truck Graveyard"..Sara
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