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Outta My Mind

youtook me, shook me outta my mind What were you trying to find? you took me, shook me outta my world gave it a twirl. spinned me for a whirl We made love..you drove me crazy My mind was hazy..We were lazy that day you drove me...outta my mind Carron Carter-original

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Edlynn Nau

Date: 8/28/2015 5:20:00 PM

YES! This works on several levels! VERY GOOD! Favorite line: "you took me, shook me outta my world." Question: Did you want "spinned" me for a whirl? Not "spun"? ? ? Typo: space between youtook 1st verse, 1st line. Typo: a comma instead of a period between twirl and spinned (2nd vrs. 2nd line) & Capital "G" on gave. All small tweaks! This was fun to read!