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Outside My Window

Right outside my window Wafting up inside, Starting every morning, Continues through the night, Foods from every nation, Right here where I live Delicious and very tasty, Different foods Instead Starting with the sizzlers, Starts the day ahead, Moving on to bacon, Then butties on the bread, The day goes on and very soon, Fish chips peas and pie, Getting very noisy, People’s passing by, All day long the laughter, Children playing too, Bouncing or kicking balls, Noises coming through, Night time comes along, Drunks are singing song, Waiting for their food, Curry pot, Chinese too, Contest by Bev – Smith 22/09/15

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Date: 10/18/2015 11:43:00 AM
Dear Wendy Love this my new friend it makes me hungry though and I'm on a diet lol, good luck in the contest my fellow souper. By the way yes I am a history buff, love to research but with this creature it's a little more had a experience as a child that I can't explain except I believe he does exsist, cheri
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 10/18/2015 4:17:00 PM
Me too on a diet but it never works, I love food, I am going to Spain next year, first time abroad x and I'm going to eat and enjoy the food, all in exclusive, so I'm going to enjoy my self and worry later, LOL, I live in England, Looking forwards to reading your work, it's very good, xx Wendy
Date: 9/29/2015 1:12:00 AM
Very wonderful take on the theme Wendy! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/29/2015 2:47:00 AM
Thank you very much, I am trying to move houses to a more quiet one LOL xxxxx thanks xxx
Date: 9/28/2015 11:05:00 PM
Wendy, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/29/2015 2:50:00 AM
Thank you That's just the outside of my window, inside is cold and damp LOL xxxx thank you for you comment xxxxx Wendy
Date: 9/22/2015 5:04:00 PM
Oh, change noise to noisy to perfect this near perfect poem. So many things out your very busy window - I love it, great poem ... CayCay
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 9/22/2015 6:12:00 PM
Hi thanks I have change it, Noisy cheers, The noise never lets up day and night x even now xxx Wendy

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