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Outside My Window

On the cold floor I jerk awake, And like a miracle a light shines, I stand on my toes and look, Outside my tiny window the sun is risin', I can almost feel its rays, Caressing my cold clammy skin, Outside the land is barren. It’s all barbed wire surrounding me…Tall and forbidding. But outside I see freedom, I can taste it though from afar, Outside I see the sun wink at me, I ‘am another day closer to freedom. By marion mwangi 11/sept/2015

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Date: 9/30/2015 1:22:00 PM
Love your write, Marion. I can feel the determination and hope. Well done!
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Date: 9/29/2015 5:08:00 AM
Well done congrats xxxx Wendy
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Marion Mwangi
Date: 9/29/2015 5:24:00 AM
thanks Wendy
Date: 9/29/2015 2:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win Marion!
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Marion Mwangi
Date: 9/29/2015 5:23:00 AM
thanks very much Cheema
Date: 9/28/2015 11:40:00 PM
Very wonderful take on the theme Marion! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Marion Mwangi
Date: 9/29/2015 5:23:00 AM
thanks Dr.Upma very much
Date: 9/28/2015 10:59:00 PM
Marion, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**
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Marion Mwangi
Date: 9/29/2015 5:21:00 AM
Hie SKAT thank you.

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