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Outside My Window

Fall A great time to sheepishly peer out Of my time worn window The window that gives me splinters if I look too close But if I take the time to see past the splinters And age I see the beauty of my back yard That was once a field of dirt and weeds Fall A great time to sheepishly peer out Of my time worn window

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/25/2016 2:01:00 PM
Hi, Jack, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/30/2015 2:14:00 PM
Nice write.
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Date: 9/29/2015 12:10:00 AM
Very wonderful take on the theme Jack! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Date: 9/28/2015 11:04:00 PM
Jack, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 9/10/2015 12:42:00 PM
Jack, wonderfully penned verse, I truly enjoyed it and thanks for visiting my poem, Frigidaire .. yes a very odd theme, honestly one has to wonder, why with so many possible beautiful themes that could be used ...
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