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OUTSIDE Out past tomorrow, outside of time, There is a place where we can meet After this war is over. We can talk about fleshy things, If you like, but be careful, Science has no words for this place; The mouth is empty, legs are useless, Innocence and guilt have no meaning. Then, there, will you tell the truth about love? Why you shunned me like a lame donkey? In this forgiving place lies leave no disgrace So there is no reason to spare my feelings. Nothing to you, you were my everything. What about emotions? They have no use, Feelings are not sacred truths. There is no line between friends and lovers. Abundance in the heart leads to a soul complete. There’s a freedom on the other side, This is a burden from which we’ll rise. From the standpoint of eternity The fear of dying looks like the fear of living.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/15/2017 3:45:00 PM
Hello Phil. How powerful because you allow the reader to pause with such thoughts especially the last line which truly speaks and stands out. Well done and expressed.
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Date: 3/20/2017 7:34:00 PM
Thanks Lisa I appreciate your comments.
Date: 3/13/2017 2:25:00 AM
"Outside of time", Deep and meaningful Phil, I liked it
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Osman for stopping by and commenting.
Date: 3/12/2017 7:08:00 PM
oh this is so true! I love the positive vibes of this poem...
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:32:00 AM
Thanks Becca :)
Date: 3/11/2017 10:23:00 PM
This was very deep and honest. I really liked it :)
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Date: 3/12/2017 9:56:00 AM
Thanks Tat.
Date: 3/10/2017 7:51:00 PM
Phil. This is full of sincere feeling. It's sad and beautifully expressed.
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Date: 3/11/2017 7:09:00 AM
I'm glad you liked it Andrea, thanks for commenting.

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