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~ Outside ~ In the darkest of rooms I felt for a door… With a handful of keys I searched for more… What has been taken or lost along the way… I can still see in dreams where they live and play… On a blank dismal wall I scribed a window to see… I sketched a sunset in color and soon I was free… ~ Poet Mike ~

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Date: 5/20/2016 7:02:00 AM
Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.
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Date: 12/25/2015 10:29:00 PM
Hi Michael, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/23/2015 7:15:00 AM
- Just want to say from me and Arild - Marry Christmas and a peaceful new year 2016 :) - Best wishes and hugs :)
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Date: 10/7/2015 10:49:00 AM
You sketch ever so beautifully Mike. SKAT
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Date: 9/27/2015 11:23:00 AM
:) Lovely....oh that everyone could do that and taste the joy of freedom. Great write.
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