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Outside

Born on the outside of the world Everything seems so strange Never felt like I belonged Success is the only thing that keeps me tethered to the absurdity The pain of fading consiousness in the last lap is the only reality Everything else is trapped in another world... Don't know where don't know why don't know how

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Skat A

Date: 5/10/2015 10:57:00 AM

Phillipe :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love

Phillipe Foucher
Date: 5/12/2015 6:10:00 AM

Thank you :) did you get the message I sent you? I'm still new to this and I'm not sure what to do.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/5/2015 2:37:00 PM

Great to read what keeps you together, Phillipe, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Phillipe Foucher
Date: 5/6/2015 4:40:00 AM

Thank you :) I appreciate it! I'll make sure I check out your poetry.

Skat A

Date: 5/5/2015 10:04:00 AM

Nicely done Phillipe,I don't know if it is a good thing or bad, but I for sure take advantage of it. :), Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT