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OUTSIDE Sun awakens from its sleep  stillness of the day uninterrupted morning rituals call hold to momentary pause. The mirror speaks, an epiphany. Its quintessence brought forth so true prior existence but a dream, deep unconscious. Such ***** speech proclaimed; Othelo’s troubles yet persist this dread now orbits secret self. Two reflections to bare, one more true than real, incorruptible authenticity. The other, searching for hope deferred Doused with water from dry wells that reflection now mutated for society’s dictums  bare da Vinci’s vitruvian man now lost. Ellison’s Invisible Man transmogrified from progeny to enigma  Outside, dichotomy of self-serving expectations to universal being more paradoxical calling to a barren soul. Oh, only to denude my camouflaged existence for a day If the screen were one shade of grey would for a day, just to live all grey Tony Ginyard (c)

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Date: 6/5/2016 9:16:00 PM
KARL, NICE TO SEE IT AGAIN...SKAT-
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Date: 6/10/2013 8:50:00 PM
Hi Karl, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/4/2013 4:50:00 PM
Karl. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda"
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Karl Ginyard
Date: 6/5/2013 6:01:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words. I really feel welcome. I I will take you up on your offer soon, I am always looking for feedback. Thanks again. Tony G
Date: 6/4/2013 12:18:00 PM
This is an excellent piece of writing. Intricately woven words. Welcome to P?Soup
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Karl Ginyard
Date: 6/7/2013 3:25:00 PM
Thanks Kim. I feel welcome
Date: 6/4/2013 10:34:00 AM
Karl, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Karl Ginyard
Date: 6/7/2013 3:27:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise

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