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Outline of a Ghost

I see tears that pour down my crying face Reaching illusions of my life alone I see the outline of a ghost in space Transparent and see thru, seems to have grown My tears just enlighten and fill with grace It won’t go away, it’s stuck to this zone Memories flood my senses, hurt creeps in Ghost is my lost love, buried deep within Russell Sivey Just a made up poem…

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Date: 3/2/2014 7:34:00 PM
a real little treasure Russell great pen hugs
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Date: 3/2/2014 10:23:00 AM
glad to hear this is just made up, Russell - really love this
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Date: 3/1/2014 2:17:00 AM
you struck a sensitive chord with this poignant yet radiant piece, russell.. " ghost is my new love", how visually assaulting.. awesome job!.. huggs
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Date: 3/1/2014 1:02:00 AM
This is the poet in you Russell,you have thought beyond ordinary level,you have gone into another level where poetry dwells and the outcome of this trip to the land of wisdom is the tear in your face.A great work is this and I really enjoyed it.Happy weekend my Russell.
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Date: 3/1/2014 12:26:00 AM
Lovely poem, filled with emotion. Whether real or written ..Seren
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