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Outer Space:A Dreamer's Dream

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Outer Space:A Dreamer's Dream

Stars in my midst
Jupiter my pillow
Earth my footstool
Dreams yet unshattered
High above the clouds
I'm limitless and talented
Comets my bedtime story
The sun my alarm clock
Mars my breakfast, lunch, and dinner
I'm living in outer space
And loving how it feels
Pluto and Uranus my distant brothers
Venus my mother 
And Mercury, my sister
The possibilities are endless
All you have to do is dream
Dream high and big
Higher than people will ever think to imagine
The Milky Way my home
And as I awake from this dream
I know that's where I belong

Copyright © Jasmine Whipps

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  1. Date: 10/5/2010 12:04:00 PM
    A mighty ambitious dream. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 8:57:00 PM
    This is very imaginative!! I really like it. And congratulations, Jasmine. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 4:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Jasmine

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 4:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Jasmine in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Heaven's Sake". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/3/2010 8:54:00 PM
    Congrats Jasmine on your super win in BG's contest with this great piece... enjoy your win today with luv..

  1. Date: 10/3/2010 6:36:00 PM
    I enjoyed your poem very much..congrats on placing in my contest. BG

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 10:12:00 PM
    Great imagery of our possible dreamscapes. Enjoyed the imagery a lot. Well done. Chris.

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 9:51:00 PM
    lol funn write,, in out sleep is surely our one escape lol,enjoyed...p.d.