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Outer Darkness

with unconsoled cries weeping and gnashing their teeth ~ their worm never dies
————— for the Hell Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by Robert James Liguori written on 3/26/23

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Date: 3/26/2023 1:56:00 PM
Horror! Very creepy good hell haiku, Jeff.
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Date: 3/26/2023 8:23:00 AM
An eternity of torment. Well depicted in your verse, Jeff.
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Date: 3/26/2023 8:22:00 AM
So true, Jeff:)
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Date: 3/26/2023 7:45:00 AM
Haha just read a worm poem from John Lawless, I wrote one about a week ago - didn't know worms were so popular in poetry :) great, menacing haiku
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Date: 3/26/2023 6:41:00 AM
...horrific...and well written, Jeff - Best wishes in the contest - hugs
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