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Outer Child

I kept hearing about my inner child So I decided I should let him out A nasty little guy always in trouble It's the story I will tell you about Everywhere he went he left a big mess It was impossible to get things done He stayed up many hours playing games He was only concerned with having fun He never woke up till the crack of noon All his laundry was left in a big pile His hair never combed looked like a rat's nest He said it was Rastafarian style He went over to the wrong side of town him and all his friends painted it all red As much as I tried I couldn't stop him The kid wouldn't listen to what I said When he decided, to finally come home I was confused and didn't know what to do My once unblemished body now was marked The Kid came back with a dragon Tatoo I think I was crazy to let him out Now that I've met him there's little to say He is a lot more than I can handle I have decided to lock him away Inspired by Mandy Tams She got me to thinking about my own inner child, be sure to read her poem "My Inner Child"

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Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/10/2013 4:51:00 PM

Oh, no. You can't lock him up, Richard!! He is who that makes life fun :) You'll be missing out all the wonderful stuffs he will get you into. Don't you want to try, lol?

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/10/2013 4:55:00 AM

amazing poem, Richard,, at least you recognized the symptoms, many dont...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/10/2013 5:02:00 AM

Fortunate for me this was a flight of imagination. Many my age buy a sports car, find a young wife and generally go insane for a while.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/10/2013 12:58:00 AM

Ha ha, thanks Richard I am so pleased my inner child called out to yours, I will make sure mine behaves xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/10/2013 5:04:00 AM

Thanks for the inspiration, this was a lot of fun.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/9/2013 8:55:00 PM

Richard, my inner child with match yours...LOL..kidding... You are right in keeping him settled in confinement.. ;-)... but letting him out every now and then is not such a bad thing.. sometimes I can not control my inner child.. and guess what... i love games pass midnight up till this date... good read...inspired by Mandy... xox~LINDA

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/9/2013 11:15:00 PM

Thanks Linda, I think my inner child took control of my keyboard.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/9/2013 3:38:00 PM

: ) Oh!This is adorable! I haven't read Mandy's poem, but with her sense of humor, I can imagine! I enjoyed this, very much, Richard. Always so interesting! Always, Annalise

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/9/2013 11:18:00 PM

Thanks Annalise, I appreciate the nice comment.