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Out There Somewhere

I know you're out there somewhere, perhaps wishing on a star. Probably dreaming, just like me, but I don't know where you are! I'm wondering how your voice will sound, when you whisper in my ear? How our loving arms will feel, when we hold each other near? I'm hoping that our hearts entwine, when passion takes control, and if it does, I know sweetheart, true love will soon unfold. I wish to wake-up by your side, neath a galaxy of stars! I know you're out there somewhere, I just don't know where you are! Ralph Taylor Challenge - Max 8 Lines 10/10/11

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Date: 10/23/2011 6:59:00 PM
Congratulations Ralph. I loved the way this poem read, lovely flow and wonderful words... good job...Margaret
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Date: 10/14/2011 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry placing in Russell's "Challenge" contest Ralph. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/12/2011 4:30:00 AM
An excellent write Ralph!Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/12/2011 1:13:00 AM
this is very sweet, Ralph and hey, it goes along with my sugar stars poem!!!
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Date: 10/12/2011 12:59:00 AM
Oh that's so nice, hope you find her. Well done. Lovely poem. Lee
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Date: 10/12/2011 12:37:00 AM
Oh yeah, I hope you find what you are looking for! I did and each morning I look to my side as I open my eyes for my very own keepsake. Congrats on your win! Ed :-)
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Date: 10/11/2011 11:49:00 PM
Great poetry Ralph, John Wayne in the western The Searchers with Jeffry Hunter? comes to mind?
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Date: 10/11/2011 9:13:00 PM
Congrats Ralph on another awesome win with these touching words my friend.. u speak and wrote for so many with this beautiful entry luv.. hope all is well with u and family too..luv.. we are finally moved in..oh ..big job..
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Date: 10/11/2011 12:25:00 PM
it is this search that keeps life ticking,,nice write..
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