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It was just another story, my grandmother told I wish I had known, what I've learned since then How the dust from the hills swept over the plains and how months without rain, would change everything. Out of water, had been no worry Until it changed their life, back then, It was how she met the man It is partly her own story It is part of who I am I can see it all so clearly, How they paid a price, so dearly, She was Kansas born and bred, They had built a life securely staking everything they owned on a home, on a life, in the loam. Short of water, was the motto It had changed her life, back then, It was how she met her man It is part of her old memories It is part of who I am On the homestead, growing barley, growing wheat, and corn, and kids Sharing love she had for family but the drought had come instead. No water for their crops, no feed to fill the stock The hardship and the illness And drought upon the hills No coin the pay the bills.....meager water in the pail Quivering trees, and stiff shocks of corn Withering slowly, from the winds Sandstorms covered scores of farmland till the end Her husband growing ill A grave dug in the sand Out west, another land No man to hold her hand In the west they found the water It had changed her life, back then, It was how she met her man It is partly her own story It is part of who I am _________________________________________ 2/21/15 "Out of Water" Contest: Sponsored By Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Date: 4/5/2015 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. though your verse is free, it is a highly musical piece, a novel in lyrics.
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Date: 4/5/2015 12:07:00 AM
nice personal touch to your poem, Carrie. seems like lyrics of a folk song. Congrats for fine win. Mohan
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Date: 4/4/2015 8:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win and a 7 and a fav. Have a wonderful Easter Sunday
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Carrie Richards
Date: 4/4/2015 8:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Wishing you a beautiful Easter as well !! :) and thank you for your many kind comments, always so appreciated and never overlooked. God Bless and Happy Easter!
Date: 4/4/2015 3:27:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win for your personal historical accounting delivered in your poem of this horrible time in history. So wonderfully written! Hugs, Sandra
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Carrie Richards
Date: 4/4/2015 8:29:00 PM
Thank you so much for your continued support, Sandra, and wishing you and your family a blessed Easter! Thanks for your kindness!
Date: 4/4/2015 2:42:00 PM
Carrie, this is a painful reminder of a torturous time in the US. The Dust Bowl God it must have been horrible. This is beautifully written, the repetition of the chorus like stanzas adds to the impact. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 4/4/2015 2:24:00 PM
Carrie, thanks for digging into your family history, good strong details. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for entering this very popular contest, we had very many wonderful contributions. Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_bataan_641273
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Date: 3/2/2015 6:37:00 PM
goodness, what great writing for this contest, Carrie. I think mine was just a mere limerick. You really raised the bar!Love how it has stanzas like a song.
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Date: 2/28/2015 2:53:00 PM
Carrie, wow, what an awesome write for the contest, as usual you deliver, its fantastic and thanks so much for visiting my poetry today . . .
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Date: 2/21/2015 8:24:00 PM
Carrie, this is FANTASTIC!!! Your writing made this historical event come alive. I enjoyed this very much! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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