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Out of the Box

Out of the box I’ve been here forever, I wish I was leaving I just can not wait to get out of this box It’s dark and it’s cramped and so difficult breathing Hey, I’m not a toy or a new pair of socks, I push and I shove but I find it’s not helping I claw at the sides but make nary a dent I whimper and sigh and I’ve even tried yelping Hoping they hear and some aid soon is sent There’s nothing to eat and my stomach is growling And using the bathroom, I don’t even try Wait, what’s that sound, it’s like someone’s is prowling Maybe they’ll notice if I start to cry Hold on a minute, now stop with that shaking There is a voice, it sounds just like a kid Come on, let’s go, before me you are breaking Tear off the paper and open the lid Get me out of here, can’t you see I’ve been waiting Humans are stupid it seems like to me No need to question, no use in debating But who wraps a puppy for under the tree? 12/29/16 Written for the Out of the Box Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 12/29/2016 8:04:00 PM
Love the rhyme. Tells a good story. Lots of Luck In contest. Do have a splendid New year. Peace, Love and Joy
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Chris Green
Date: 12/30/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thanks so very much John, I appreciate your nice comment.
Date: 12/29/2016 4:04:00 PM
A delightful surprise this poem was Chris. Well written w/a touch of joy and sadness. Poor puppsy. Hope he ain't traumatized. But hey, a different write for you, albeit, a good one. A different contest too. Wish you the best. Love and joy to you and yours.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/29/2016 4:43:00 PM
Thanks again Freddie, yeah a little different but the contest theme made me do it. :) I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 12/29/2016 2:14:00 PM
This brought tears to my eyes
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Darren White
Date: 12/29/2016 2:53:00 PM
Oh, yes :) (and relief)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/29/2016 2:33:00 PM
I hope they were happy tears it was supposed to be fun. :) Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 12/29/2016 12:02:00 PM
A very sweet poem...Oh poor little pup.I hope they make up to it by giving it a lot of pampering and love..Maybe He can forgive them for their silliness of wrapping him up : ).
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Chris Green
Date: 12/29/2016 12:10:00 PM
I'm sure they will. :) Thank you sweet Charmaine, I always smile when you visit.
Date: 12/29/2016 11:59:00 AM
Lovely, and very cute, Chris; the twist at the end accomplished what it set out to do:) Regards // paul
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Chris Green
Date: 12/29/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul, I am happy you enjoyed this.
Date: 12/29/2016 11:44:00 AM
I like your take on out the box!! You know the saying a puppy for life, not just Christmas!! Good luck in the competition Great write Best Wishes Kevin
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Chris Green
Date: 12/29/2016 11:52:00 AM
Thanks so much Kevin. I wasn't going to write one for this contest, but this thought crossed my mind this morning so I figured, why not. I appreciate your kind thoughts today.
Date: 12/29/2016 10:39:00 AM
I love your out of the box story, Chris, poor puppy :( good luck in the contest... Have a Happy New Year’s and all your wishes come true…Hugs Eve
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Chris Green
Date: 12/29/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thanks so very much Eve for your nice comment. I appreciate your visit today.
Date: 12/29/2016 10:30:00 AM
Hi Christmas, you've a good personification for the contest them. Aww a puppy for Christmas. That is so adorable. I wish you best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/29/2016 10:43:00 AM
Thanks so very much Alexis. I am thrilled you liked this.

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