Out of the Blue

atop of the world, four long months of summer light- ne'er a star in sight

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/6/2012 7:12:00 PM

lovely...pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 6:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in S.K.A.T.'s "Top Of The World" contest Brian. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:49:00 AM

Brian, congratualtions on your TOP OF THE WORLD haiku entry, Take care,..p.d.

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/16/2011 5:37:00 PM

Love it Brian. Lots of Haiku around at the moment, this ranks among the very best for me. Thank you for recent placings and for your contests. A chance to bring old works out for another airing :) ...regards Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/16/2011 8:45:00 AM

Congrats Brian on HM for this magnificent Haiku of vivid proportions luv..

Broken Butterfly

Date: 11/16/2011 3:28:00 AM

I think your Haiku is great. It is a winner to me. Thank you for my first place in your 16 line contest. I am just soaring on my butterfly wings.

Skat A

Date: 11/16/2011 2:37:00 AM

Dear Brian, ... Thank you for the H.M.. I really think this was one of my top Haiku's... Sorry about the title, you did not follow the title rule.... I still think this was a topper... thank you~SKAT

Titus Loh

Date: 11/10/2011 6:33:00 PM

Hi Brian, would like to thank you for your kindness in awarding me a placing in your contest. Am grateful and humbled. Yes, there is something about haiku's in lower case, yours is great (=. Thanks again, hope to be in touch.

Broken Butterfly

Date: 11/9/2011 3:49:00 PM

This is great Brian, I like doing haikus in lower case letters also. and thank you for the HM in your 12 line contest. I am adding you on my fav poet list.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2011 7:22:00 AM

I love your Haiku Brian. As there are so many different feelings on how a Haiku should be written I can only give you my opinion. Magnificent!!!!!! Love, Carol