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Out of the Badlands

Deep in the Badlands, are canyons that claim many a man, who rides without name He's hiding or runnin', from somethun' he's done Outcast, or outlaw....without any fame but keeping a lookout for someone to come A hawk circles low, on a brown afternoon, like a curious vagrant, in the land of the sun. On the trail in the Badlands, while the afternoon sighs, are two saddled horses, two men, and their packs. Cowpokes done riding, with the sun at their backs. with pall of white clouds driftin' over their heads, from a rift in the cottonwoods, that frame the canyon's ledge The riders have paused, under gunmetal skies, searching the canyon, for a place to bed down to un-halter their horses, before the stars fill the night To stare at a fire, with meager a bite and a place to find shelter, and rest up for the fight They will drink in illusion, as the horses refresh, as they prance through deep waters, on the next summer's day They are thirsty for rest, wipe the sweat off their brows Will be back by the sunrise.....when they're back on the trail Keeping a watch, from the canyon below, But moving along, as the tumbleweeds roll
. ________________________________________ Cowboys In The Badlands Contest: Sponsored By Isaiah Zerbst 9/20/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/26/2014 8:38:00 PM
A super win for a wonderful write. congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/24/2014 10:57:00 AM
Wonderful and interesting piece ,Carrie...Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...Well done...XOXO..
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Date: 10/23/2014 10:55:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win Carrie what a wonderful write...Sharon G.
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Date: 10/22/2014 10:08:00 PM
you took me there lovely pen Carrie congrats on win hugs
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Date: 10/22/2014 12:51:00 PM
Beautifully written, Carrie; deserving of the top spot. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/22/2014 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on the top place win,
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Date: 10/22/2014 10:36:00 AM
Wow, Carrie..tumbleweeds, canyons, hawks, cottonwoods..yours has it all! Congrats. Oh and gunmetal skies..woo, I love that. BG
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Date: 10/22/2014 8:45:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on this magnificent poem and your first place win! Your descriptions were outstanding! Sandra
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Date: 10/22/2014 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win. I loved this brilliant poem the first time. I am not surprised this was the best of the best.
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Date: 10/22/2014 6:00:00 AM
Many congrats on your first place win Carrie:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/22/2014 12:55:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your first place win. Marvelous... Verlena
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Date: 10/21/2014 10:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win Carrie. You did an amazing job on this very descriptive poem.
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Date: 10/21/2014 9:12:00 PM
The very best, Carrie! You did a fabulous job of expanding on the actual painting and paying attention to the instructions. I find this poem realistic and bursting with imagery that I can feel. Congratulations on a well written piece!
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Date: 9/29/2014 2:43:00 PM
This is an excellent write. Honestly I kept looking at that contest and could not come up with a thing. You did 'mahvelous dahling'. I am a big fan of your poetry.
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Date: 9/21/2014 9:11:00 AM
Very fine write on cowboys, Carrie
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Date: 9/20/2014 9:54:00 PM
Very Cool, like this :)
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Date: 9/20/2014 8:12:00 PM
I'm ready to cook up some beans and breakout the guitar...wonderful Carrie
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