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Out of My Mind Again

Out of my mind again November 6, 2013 at 6:59pm Derelict time Zone out Of my mind Fullness creeps In to the smallest of spaces Where it’s lingering Fingering the waitress As she smiles And takes another order Me to do something That you never thought of before Our time here Is the thing that you wanted For your own Me but don’t ever discard me Myself and I Wish you were not about to say something Might happen If you do it again No do it again Yes don’t do it again

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Date: 5/21/2014 6:39:00 PM
understading... and enjoyed....Linda
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:44:00 AM
nice write very interesting
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Dennis Jones
Date: 5/21/2014 11:46:00 AM
Hey thanks, Nathan.

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