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Your so far An yet so close My love for you will never seize It will grow more each day Beyond all I can see Count the stars My love will out number them Count the drops in the ocean And it will out number them Count everything you see And yet my love will still out number it.... Again your so far and yet so close, I'll just write in another notebook.

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Date: 6/25/2016 10:12:00 PM
And yet my love will still out number them... you are using infinite numbers to count everything. Use them instead of it. It sounds singular in this context. You are using plural for describing everything
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