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Out In Left

A day once long ago in life. I made a choice that led to strife. I won't go into any detail. It's enough to say it's a woeful tale. I ask myself where would I be. If I didn't get cast out to sea. On a wave of youth and foolish fun. A long lost journey of a seventh son. I went to see a therapist. She said, that's no way to exist. I waved goodbye, bid her adieu. And turned the misbegotten screw. So here I sit, nowhere to turn. Sad but true, I just don't learn. The window looks out on the world. As I hold my nuts that I have squirreled.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/14/2014 3:26:00 PM
How quick the past comes in for review/ balancing acts in living askew... for all the things we squirrel away sometimes leave us with naught to play. Lessons learned and those unlearned, leave us cause to wiggle and squirm.... Now see what you did... made me search for rhymes lol I like your poem and find it so real... excellent poetry... and yes, I did giggle, though with understanding, at that last line !!! Peace, my brother of words !!!
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Robert Johnson
Date: 1/18/2015 3:47:00 PM
Man, you rocked this comment Debra. Hope your year is going well. Peace. :)
Date: 10/11/2014 3:11:00 PM
LOL, had a chuckle at that final line. Have a great week, my friend
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Date: 9/30/2014 7:40:00 PM
hahahaa. that last line. What a twist!!!
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Date: 9/29/2014 11:07:00 AM
strong write here, my friend - and stop holding your nuts!!!!
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Date: 9/17/2014 7:59:00 PM
a strong well-rhymed and sad poem, robert. i hope it isn't true...
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