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chartreuse chassis of my rental car — relative glare 8/6/2021 A Brian Strand 1,2 or 3 line

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Date: 8/13/2021 6:34:00 AM
Depende on THE vision...It is fine color for me... salute
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2021 8:31:00 AM
lol…very good, my friend!
Date: 8/12/2021 9:25:00 PM
Congrats! Kim.Lovely..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/13/2021 8:31:00 AM
Thank you, Bhawana!
Date: 8/12/2021 9:07:00 AM
Congrats, Kim ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/12/2021 3:42:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 8/8/2021 7:11:00 PM
Ha, ha! Good one... I remember once I was given a snappy yellow Mustang as a sub for what I had ordered from a rental agency. My teen-aged kids were ecstatic; I was bummed, as my gentle mother could barely get in and get out of the contraption... Cheers, gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/9/2021 5:07:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your memory. Have a good week, sweet friend ~ Kim
Date: 8/8/2021 9:49:00 AM
I expect that would get some attention and maybe not in the right way. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/12/2021 5:29:00 AM
My daughter leased one of those Kia Soul's of that color and she and our grandson seemed to enjoy it. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2021 10:39:00 AM
Was in a funny way! My daughter and I were saying they could see us coming from a mile away. I think it was a Kia.
Date: 8/7/2021 11:25:00 AM
CLEVER one, Kim. Congrats to you
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2021 7:21:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 8/7/2021 10:36:00 AM
A wonderful haiku, Kim. Congratulations. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2021 10:45:00 AM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 8/7/2021 6:55:00 AM
Wow. Great! Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2021 9:11:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 8/7/2021 2:10:00 AM
Perfect way to end a haiku. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2021 4:25:00 AM
Thank you, Victor :) This one is based on a true story!
Date: 8/6/2021 8:05:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/7/2021 4:25:00 AM
Thank you, Pam! :)

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