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ayeD on my beD anD closeD mY eyes , tRying to be saFe fRom all the thouGhts insiDe , iT's almoSt midniGht buT iT feeLs so briGht , whaT can i dO if i'm jusT a dreameR wanTs to be shiNe I know I'm noT suRe or maYbe noT righT buT u can't feeL the paIn unleSs u touCh a fiRe , i'M noT sayinG I want to buT if it taKes i wiLL , noT becauSe i wanT to geT huRt buT cuZ i miGht lighT up liKe a siLver rinG people loOk fR haPpy endinGs oR maGicaL riDes I alreaDy haV thaT all in mY minD ,yeaH liFe is haRd so i Keep lOokinG foR wayS out oR plaCes wheRe i trueLy belonG buT i gueSs i won't finD thaT wiTh aLL the masKs arounD . Thats whY i layEd on my beD anD cloSed my eyeS anD then i hearD someOne wispeR in mY heaD and saY : peopLe thRow roCks aT thinGs thaT shiNe buT i'll fiGht theiR doubTs anD giVe u faith , cuZ theY can neveR take what's ouRs ......

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Skat A

Date: 10/27/2013 1:45:00 AM

Hi Mira, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Mira Bououni
Date: 11/2/2013 12:48:00 PM

thank you very much for your comment it put a smile upon my face dear , i liked your poems too i think you have a huge experience i can really learn from , so i've been busy these days but i will submit my poems , it won't be as good as yours but i'll try my best , thank u again <3

Mark Peterson

Date: 10/26/2013 5:33:00 PM

Mira--This is lovely and worth the effort to read. Delightful to try to figure out if you've got everything under control or are completely losing it. I enjoyed your writing. Mark

Mira Bououni
Date: 11/2/2013 12:52:00 PM

hello mister peterson , well i feel blessed and so pround because of what you said , i'm a little young girl who writes what she feels ana believe in, i see this life with a wide happy eyes , i don't have any experience or knowledge when it comes to writing , so i hope you can help me out , so please contact me

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/26/2013 11:40:00 AM

Hello Mira, , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Mira Bououni
Date: 11/2/2013 12:55:00 PM

hello ! thank you very much i'll make time to get in here and share my diaries with you guys , i hope you'll like them , i wish i can be a member of your big family , it's so great to make friends who have the same intrests , so thank u linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2013 11:39:00 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Mira ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Mira Bououni
Date: 11/2/2013 12:59:00 PM

hi anne-lise :) thank you for ur wishes it's a great push which can make me do better , it is great to meet u , hope wa can be friends , and have a nice day full of smiles :D