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Our World Is Right

As I lay my head upon your chest, I feel my body to begin to rest. Your arms wrapped around,holding me tight, Now I know our world is right! Hoping and praying for no intrusion, Please God tell me this is not an illusion! I never thought love would give me a second chance, Let alone a second glance! Listen to our hearts as they beat, Who would of thought true love would have us meet? Every night I go to bed and pray, That we'll wake up to each other and have another day. My heart, before use to feel so much hate, Now I believe I have found my soul mate! I truly believe together we belong, If we let our love sore, than we can't go wrong! Even if it seems a little scary, I promise our love, I will always carry!

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/13/2011 3:27:00 PM

Another nice write on the feelings of love, Angela

Emma Mantle

Date: 6/13/2011 10:08:00 AM

A great piece, i enjoyed this Angela. I'm pleased you've found your second chance. Nice expression used here. Best wishes Em :)

Ian Foley

Date: 6/13/2011 9:51:00 AM

Scared or not a second chance is deserved by all. We are here but once and it is not a lot to ask. Good luck and nicely written. Ian F

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/13/2011 9:32:00 AM

My heart touched two lines of your poem " Who would of thought true love would have us meet ?" and " If we let our love sore, then we can't go wrong Even if it seems a little Scary". VERY NICE AND LOVED IT.