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The world as I know it... stays unknown My world as I know it... stays hidden Our world as we know it... we are alone This world as the world knows it... stays broken This world...have you sat down recently to think about? And when you do... all you think about is yourself Humanities are never smart because someone is always proud We are writing overwritten history today by oneself Only humanity has a way to make sure of it That our modern world is helpful and harmful just the same We will help and patch and we will kill and bleed We will become better or worst because we cannot maintain Even the ones who are truly helping these days I have my judgement whether or not it be true Judgement we learn in form of presentation ways Just imagine, we are given power by the many you This world as I know it... I am alone This world as I see it... remains broken The ever changing world stays unknown Perhaps to the world... we are hidden

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Date: 11/22/2017 9:40:00 PM
Extremely dark and truthful. Nice poem, JL.
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Date: 11/22/2017 9:05:00 PM
Very dark poem - well done. Thankfully we all have our community of poets here to fall back on for support and hope in the world...
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