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I know not where the hours go, the minutes fly and the seconds roam; I know not whether they stay or leave, for the clock says they've departed; But to my heart, every moment lingers, memory upon memory; Not a day has passed in my mind's eye, where they did not save me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/8/2011 2:36:00 AM
Very nice Andy, hope you submit your poems in contests, this is really good. Well done. Lee
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Date: 10/7/2011 9:29:00 PM
This is a short poem without rhymes feel so simple. Add some more rhymes will increase more attraction for it. Why you didn't use rhymes in such a short poem?
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