our song

"our song" if we chose a song what would it be a concept to match this love affair something telling of you and me embracing kisses here and there whispers making emotions flow from the first word to the last to feel and witness what we hold leaving no questions asked for such passions we unfold sounds reaching desires high lyrics of eight days a week a lovely beginning to our story yet more is hoped for what we seek capturing a one in a million glory phrases justifying a wondrous touch telling silhouettes of loving hands with kept promises of tenderness soft as warm silk golden sands all natural true and effortless meanings realizing bewitchment our song is no other than evergreen defining us and everything in between SkyWatcher 12-03-23

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/16/2023 8:19:00 AM

This is such a delightful poem painted in romantic hues, Lisa! Seems like I'm listening to the song to "The one I love". The end couplet sums it all up. ~ Warm regards & blessings, my friend // paul

Lisa Ricci
Date: 1/12/2024 5:14:00 AM

Dear Paul. Good Morning and Happy New Year. Please forgive me that I did not respond to your beautiful and generous review and commentary. Thank you ever so much. Truly, May this day find you safe and well. May 2024 bring all things good for you. Peace Blessings and more now and always. Have a wonderful morning. (smile)

Bill Baker

Date: 12/9/2023 7:30:00 AM

We all need this kind of song to sing, to feel Love and completeness is life, my friend. Thanks for share you romantic and loving poetry with us. May Light shine upon each path you choose, and may you never lose, your thoughts of Love. Smiles ~ Blessings, Lisa. This one goes on my FAVs list. Hugs, Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/10/2023 3:46:00 AM

Good Morning. Once again I say Bill Bill Bill. It is I who thanks you. Truly. Yes, thank you. May there be love for all. Have a beautiful morning and day. May it show all things good for you and Sara. I will see you on your page. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)

Tom Woody

Date: 12/4/2023 7:06:00 AM

A song of evergreen, the symbol for eternity. Quite nice Lisa. As for us, we have our special song. It's George Strait's I Cross my Heart. It meant a little when we were dating

Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/5/2023 3:49:00 AM

Good Morning Tom. Hello. Thank you as always. Thank you also for sharing your song to which is beautiful. Where would we be without love. Nowhere. Have a wonderful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always (smile)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/4/2023 4:03:00 AM

Oh my, this is such an exquisite poem with elegant hues of love & describing the essence of a love song that becomes an evergreen heartbeat of memories for their precious moments.. Some lyrics just glide in our hearts forever and become uniquely special for two lovers who tend to connect with it.. I adore your wordplay here and especially the last stanza.. Everything's so beautifully woven here :) sending light- Hiya

Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/5/2023 3:28:00 AM

Good Morning Hiya. Hello. It is very nice to meet you. Thank you for turning to my page and entry. Your review intake and commentary are all gracious and generous. Truly. Never do I take any of that for granted. I look forward to turning to your page. Have a wonderful day. I truly am honored by your generosity. I am sending light back to you as well. Peace and Blessings (smile)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/4/2023 3:58:00 AM

I think every couple has a favourite song that reminds them of their first meeting, ours was Bohemian Rhapsody. Tom

Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/5/2023 3:23:00 AM

Good Morning Tom. Hi. Thank you very much for visiting my page and entry and yes for sharing your song. How interesting intriguing and fascinating. The song is amazing I agree. Have a wonderful day filled with continued health. Peace and Blessings now and always. (smile)