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In “My field of dreams” You asked me: “Can I hold your hand” In an attempt to “salvage” what was left of us It felt like I was “Free Falling” while we were “Exploring the Shadows” In between our “Two Worlds Colliding” Even though it felt like “The Closest thing to Crazy”, So “Erratic” at times We were “Flying without Wings” In the end that “Confused Space” Were swept away by our “Altered Needs” In honor of the “It’s all in the titles contest by Adam Hapworth”
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Date: 8/22/2013 3:21:00 PM
Wilma....all your titles flow so easily to create a lovely written story. Hugs
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Date: 8/20/2013 1:27:00 PM
Fabulous job, Wilma! Great songs, too :)
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Date: 8/20/2013 7:21:00 AM
I agree with Becca. AWESOME job.
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Date: 8/19/2013 12:25:00 PM
Wow! Feelimg threatened already. Check mine out titled "It's all in the titles", please
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Date: 8/19/2013 3:20:00 AM
Excellent. Very good write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 8/18/2013 11:55:00 PM
Beautiful entry, Wilma! Fantastic job putting this together. It's already a winner to me. Hope all is well! Much love, Annalise
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Date: 8/17/2013 3:17:00 PM
You did an excellent job. I very much enjoyed.
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Date: 8/17/2013 8:30:00 AM
Amazing write! This is really good. Good luck my dear.
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Date: 8/16/2013 10:33:00 PM
Wow, you have integrated your poem titles very well into this write my friend! I have yet to attempt this contest, though I think it could be very interesting to create! I truly loved reading this amazing piece this evening! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/16/2013 2:53:00 PM
love this clever write, Wilma lfde
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Date: 8/16/2013 2:06:00 PM
Nicely done. I like the poem and the titles
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Date: 8/16/2013 10:51:00 AM
- Wilma .... just beautiful!! - Good luck in the contest, I cross my fingers that this is the winning poem! - Wish you a nice weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2013 9:38:00 AM
Sounds like a winner to me!!!!!! I was placed in a lovely atmosphere after reading this..beautifully written!!
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Date: 8/16/2013 8:04:00 AM
I quite enjoyed what you did here. =) This was a great read.
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Date: 8/16/2013 7:40:00 AM
this works very well and, without the quotation marks, i wouldn't have known this was composed of titles. nice job!
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Date: 8/16/2013 7:33:00 AM
very good write Wilma gl in contest Shadow x smiles
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