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Our River

River takes love Fire takes soul Angels open wings You they come to hold No promise opened No eyes closed Silent with moonlight Your heart now exposed Floating pure sweetness Falling makes you quiver Our souls make fire Our love makes the river

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/9/2012 10:45:00 PM
A beautifully passionate write, Jamie! Great metaphor and imagery happening here. Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 7/23/2012 3:49:00 PM
A lovely written poem Jamie, like it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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