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Our Right

Under the vines, of heavy ruins, comes much regret, of other's doings. Give it away, just spend, spend, spend, when it's all gone, what then. Borrow more, get on your knees, they are probably tired, of our many needs. Foolish, and carefree, falling fast, many told them, this can't last. Blind as bats, and dumb as dirt, now look at the people, they have hurt. Things change fast, just blink your eyes, and cover your ears, here comes more lies. Clean fresh air, is what we need, let goodness prevail, exit the greed. We can do it, we know what's right, we must speak up, that is our right. If money could talk, of where it's been, another nightmare, begins.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/11/2008 3:36:00 AM
Hi. Thanks for your comment on my poem! I like the criticism on the wall street people who are curled up at home counting their $$ when the rest of the world are suffering.
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Date: 10/10/2008 7:26:00 PM
Christy - How is one of my favorite people in the world doing - I'm just a simple guy who really knows nothing of high finance and wall street and all that - I do know to fish and hunt, Raise a steer and butcher it - Grow my own garden and such and the way things are looking I'm glad I do - Thank you for all the kind and supportive comments and the highly treasured friendship Christy - God Bless - Michael
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Date: 10/10/2008 5:21:00 PM
Christy thank you so much for your wonderful comments..I love this poem. It speaks to me and its on point at the right time. Well said..money and greed, dangerous..thank you.
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Date: 10/10/2008 4:42:00 PM
It's time people stand up for what is right instead of seeking the quick buck. This is a timely poem with a good perspective. Much to think about in your words. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/10/2008 3:53:00 PM
that is so true Christy, but it is money that makes the world go round, the haves and the have nots, the unfairness and the greed, believe me it will not always be this way, great write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/10/2008 2:16:00 PM
A very poignant write, filled with truth. Regards, Sara
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Date: 10/10/2008 12:44:00 PM
WE need another 1776. The apathy is killing us. Vince
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Date: 10/9/2008 3:31:00 AM
I agree wholeheartedly! It is so disgusting what has happened to this land and her poeple. $$$ is eating us alive. Kristin
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Date: 10/8/2008 11:59:00 PM
THIS PIECE IS TOO LOGICAL, REASONABLE, & HAS TOO MUCH MORALITY EMBEDDED W/IN IT.....(LOL!) I THOUROUGHLY ENJOYED IT, & PLAN TO SHARE IT W/MY FELLOW PATRIOTIC-HOLY SPIRIT FILLED-SLIGHTLY BENT (BUT NOT AS MUCH AS I)-PRAYER WARRIORS! I THANK YOU FOR THIS ONE! "AAAHHHH!"
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Date: 10/8/2008 7:28:00 PM
I feel like Rodney Dangerfield "no respect". They don't care whether we live or die, especially when we reach retirement age. when they look at us all they see is dollar signs. Or something to be used!i wonder if our vote even counts, so much fraud nowadays. Maybe one day people will open their eyes and see what is really going on,Ron
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