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Our Pickle Party

What a fine party, we’ll swim in the brine Let’s invite Mr. Kosher Dill and Mrs. Gherkin, I’m sure we’ll make memories to enshrine If Mr. Sweet wears his favorite wool firkin! We must invite the Bread-and-Butter twins, Mr. Crinkle Chips must surely be on our list Refrigerator pickles with a Vlasic label wins Prizes we shall offer, Miss Lime will insist. For refreshments we can serve Mr. Kool-Aids Since nobody will think of them as a pickle If they aren’t in a jar and are home-made, Our pickle party will be fun in the shade!
Written August 13, 2022 submitted to "It's a Pickle Party" Poetry Contest sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 8/13/2022 10:14:00 PM
Just invite a couple of pregnant gals, and they'll be pickled tink to be there! ~ Tee-hee
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/14/2022 8:29:00 AM
Tsc! Tsc! You know, to be truthful, I don't know a single pregnant woman right now. Hmm...I don't even know any married ones either.
Date: 8/13/2022 12:32:00 PM
Such an effort in creativity to bring us this fabulous funny Light Verse Milton. I enjoyed how you phrased and implemented this Pickle theme of yours. Impressive to conjure all of it together to create our thoughts and enjoy the humor. Great effort and thank you for sharing...
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Michael Tor
Date: 8/13/2022 7:18:00 PM
Ha, thanks for the invitation Milton...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/13/2022 3:38:00 PM
I'm so happy you enjoyed the poem, Michael. By the way, you are invited, too.
Date: 8/13/2022 7:54:00 AM
Very funny and clever Milton
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/13/2022 10:13:00 AM
Thank you, Terry. You're invited, my friend!
Date: 8/13/2022 7:11:00 AM
Milt, WOW, how wonderful is this poem, you are one creative and talented writer, if this poem does not place there is something wrong in the world ! Enjoyed your funny poem so much, it was a great way to start the day, with a smile, blessings ~Constance
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/13/2022 3:39:00 PM
That's a very sweet thing to say, Constance. Thanks so much. I'll keep my fingers crossed.

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