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Our Peace

I looked at the horrible faces, agnostic, I look at the beautiful faces, pristine, I looked for a summer in the midst of winter, and for repose in a gruelling duel with death and oblivion. I looked for salvation, looked outside the door for breath and bread. I looked towards the sun, and inwards, and moved upwards and moved closer to the stars, within the cyclone of your scars, within the summer of your love. I looked before overlooking anything, and beyond hope, and before tomorrow and happy as I was I kissed life on the chicks and sat next to a pumpkin and read limericks. I looked within your eyes and tried to find out if they were true, and since they were true I looked further into your heart, and without further I do I said can we be one? I sat under the bodhi tree and said can I be a bodhisattva, and I was open to love and open to desire, and open to freedom of movement and the amorous rain fell on my toes and it felt so free. I looked into your eyes and within your heart and saw love, and saw possibility and discovery and laughter. For I had tasted your love so much, and tasted your dreams in my sleep. I looked within you, within me, and tried to find your peace, our peace.

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Date: 5/24/2023 3:28:00 PM
I find your poem serenely romantic, Spyros, very nice. I enjoyed taking this little poetic journey.
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Spyros Koroniotis
Date: 5/25/2023 8:10:00 AM
Thank you Ann. I am romantic so most of my poems are about love and relationships, although some are more abstract or deal with other themes. I am sorry for the “I do” it should have been ado. I had just finished writing this when I posted it. I am very glad you enjoyed reading it. There is some darkness in this poem too but love is about alleviating our shadows. Other poems I ‘ve written are more uniformly romantic and are all about light and brightness. The writing here is more experimental than the usual way I have of expressing myself and I tend to have different voices in my writing. I try to have a tempo when I write and I almost never think beforehand or correct a poem afterwards. There are of course some exceptions to this rule. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 5/11/2023 7:19:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on peace through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/9/2023 3:03:00 AM
Nothing beats total peace, food for the soul. Welcome to poetry soup Spyros. Tom
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Spyros Koroniotis
Date: 5/9/2023 3:51:00 AM
Hi Tom, thanks for the welcome! I am glad I found you. I try to meditate to find my inner peace and balance and let go. Yes it's true, nothing beats total peace. :)

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