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Our Love Is Nature

Let me run with the wind, And fly high with the grass. Only to have you by my side. I'll be floating forever on treetops if you must ask. The never ending rainbow in the bright, bright sky; Shines on end, In the forever growing soul of the butterfly. The rain will always perish the wet grasslands. The adventures the wild horses take, And the strength of a little birds' heart. Ripples through the water like that of the fish make. Stretches far past the wind as the dogs bark. If trees could grow for an eternaty, My one and only best friend; our love for each other would be extraordinary.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/8/2012 8:57:00 AM
this is'nt missing anything. i usually hate nature in poetry. but now i know that that is because most poets have not used nature as wonderfully as you have done here. you stayed with in the bounds of understandability and placed phrases in just the right places. it was as if angels were dictating. john
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Halie Doland
Date: 2/8/2012 2:48:00 PM
Thank you John. I appreciate that. - Halie lol
Date: 2/1/2012 2:03:00 PM
Thank you Leo and Carl, it is a real pleasure to have one of my poems featured this week. I didn't think that it would happen.
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week.
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Date: 1/30/2012 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Halie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2011 3:32:00 PM
Like it. "Feel fri" OXOX Love Anne-Lise
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Date: 11/28/2011 6:35:00 PM
My love is The One, whom created nature and, Everything else. * John!:) ˜
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