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Our Love Forever Sweet

The bitter icicle wind pierces the words "I love you" Before they reach your opal ears In a dream we laugh! and tumble in long grasses; Your hair, brushing my face, your scent Flushing my heart Pausing, we each gather honeysuckle blossoms Playfully guiding the stems to each other's lips Nibbling sweet nectar as our lips melt together Gently We awake entwined in each other's arms Our Love Forever Sweet

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Timothy Ray

Date: 4/14/2022 6:35:00 PM

ahhhh....see that smile on my muses face?.she adores the simplicity in cherishing the adorable....just remember...she is mine, it is OK if others make her heart dance...as long as i have the last dance...loved it Jimbo

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 3/15/2022 7:11:00 PM

The strength of true love is magic. I enjoyed reading this beautiful verse. Thank you, James

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/7/2022 11:40:00 AM

Lovely romantic piece James, so well penned indeed. Have a great day,Gordon

James Marshall Goff
Date: 3/7/2022 3:41:00 PM

Thanks Gordon!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/28/2022 10:12:00 AM

Another enchanting poem by you James. A loving passionate write so creatively expressed. Blessings, Jennifer

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/28/2022 10:44:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer!

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/25/2022 12:04:00 PM

Lovely!!

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/25/2022 5:43:00 PM

Thank you Swetha!

Bill Baker

Date: 2/24/2022 2:49:00 PM

Very romantic and playfully in love. I enjoyed your poem, James. First visit to your poetry, but not the last. Bill

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/25/2022 5:54:00 AM

Thank you Bill!

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/22/2022 9:49:00 PM

Truly is a beautiful poem, James, glad i came by.

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/23/2022 2:22:00 AM

Thanks Harry!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/22/2022 2:45:00 PM

I see you topped on the winners list my friend, why am I not surprised ! Congrats and ... waiting for more !

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/22/2022 7:20:00 PM

Thank you Vie!

Valerie Staton

Date: 2/20/2022 6:01:00 AM

Loved the imagery. Nibbling nectar huh? Nice!

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/20/2022 8:48:00 AM

Thanks Valerie!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 2/19/2022 7:29:00 PM

This is so lovely James... Loved the beginning two lines, and all words placed so well to create a perfect romantic verse... Thank you for your comments on my recent poem... Congratulations on your POTW honor... God bless... ~ Ani

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/19/2022 10:59:00 PM

Thank you Anitha!

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/19/2022 1:53:00 PM

James, Congratulations on POTW. Outstanding write. Blessings ~ Debra

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/19/2022 1:55:00 PM

Thank you my friend!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2022 8:15:00 AM

Ahh!! How romantic is this one? I enjoyed reading it this morning. Thanks for your visit. Sara

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/19/2022 9:03:00 AM

Thank you Sara!

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 2/18/2022 9:10:00 PM

Lovely, so beautiful and sweet <3

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/18/2022 11:59:00 PM

Thank you BJ!

Anil Deo

Date: 2/18/2022 8:51:00 PM

I had to come back for seconds. The first taste of honeysuckle nectar did it ... Give us more Jimbo. Shalom shalom my dear Brother ( u have tried to guide me gently away from "angry poems" & I luv thee for it)

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/18/2022 11:59:00 PM

Blessings dear Brother!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/18/2022 4:16:00 PM

Jim, this is one of your very best ~ glad to see it is on the BEST list. :)Paulette

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/18/2022 5:27:00 PM

Thanks Paulette!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/18/2022 10:03:00 AM

Beautiful romantic poetry James, congratulations on poem of the week… Belle

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/18/2022 10:17:00 AM

Thank you Belle!

John Lawless

Date: 2/16/2022 5:02:00 AM

OH, you silver tongued devil you......masterfully done.

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/16/2022 5:21:00 AM

Thanks John!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 2/14/2022 6:10:00 AM

Beautiful James ! I love the Honeysuckles:) Write on ! Congratulations on POTW! Hugs , Susan :)

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/14/2022 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Susan!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/14/2022 5:22:00 AM

Very beautiful poetry, James, congratulations on POTW:)

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/14/2022 9:59:00 AM

Thanks Jo!

Constance La France

Date: 2/13/2022 5:10:00 PM

Jim, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor ~Constance

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/13/2022 6:15:00 PM

Thank you Constance!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/13/2022 1:26:00 PM

This thought is very exciting and so inviting. "Playfully guiding the stems to each other's lips" Such a moment leaves one breathless and in bliss. Your words are beautiful, sensual, romantic and dreamy, all at the same time. My heart is fluttering. This should be printed and framed, so it can be read over and over again. Congratulations James, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Brandy

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/13/2022 6:15:00 PM

Thank you Brandy, I agree!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/13/2022 11:04:00 AM

A romantic delight James. I love it! Congratulations on having it honored for POTW! Blessings xxoo

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/13/2022 11:46:00 AM

Thank you Connie!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/13/2022 7:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTW win. A beautiful/romantic write. This would make a great card. Have a great/blessed~~day/week to come................

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/13/2022 10:45:00 AM

Hi Paula! Thank you, good idea, I've tried the card maker deal, but on my phone can't figure it out, says not compatible, I don't have laptop,, if you ever have time, make one for me, soup-mail me, we can figure out how I can get it! You might have to mail it to me! I will frame it for myself, I like it!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/13/2022 6:10:00 AM

So, so, romantic! Perfect for Valentine’s Day! Congrats on POTW, James!

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/13/2022 7:32:00 AM

Thank you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/13/2022 1:35:00 AM

Very romantic verse James, perfect for valentines day tomorrow, congratulations on POTW, enjoy the honour. Tom

James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/13/2022 7:32:00 AM

Thanks Tom!