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Our Love

Our love is like a rambling vine, It grows, it climbs, it intertwines Long and strong, a melodious song Gingerly playing all daylong Our love is like a rambling vine, It grows, it climbs, it intertwines Joined by God and not by man On good soil, not sinking sand Our love is like a rambling vine, It grows, it climbs, it intertwines… It will not crack, it will not break It will not shimmy, it will not shake Our love is like a rambling vine, It grows, it climbs, it intertwines Built on faith, built on trust Unrequited love…the two of us Our love is like a rambling vine, It grows, it climbs, it intertwines.

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Date: 2/19/2018 7:59:00 AM
Great use of repetition. Parts have a Dr. Seuss feel. It gives it a cool vibe.
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Valerie Staton
Date: 2/19/2018 12:53:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/18/2018 7:06:00 PM
This is a beautiful written free verse!!! Very smooth to the soul!!! I need to take notes from your perfection. :)
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Date: 1/10/2018 7:40:00 PM
This is so grand, so loving. Great piece James :)
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Date: 1/6/2018 10:01:00 AM
Valerie this is so beautiful! I especially love the repeating line. I enjoyed reading this romantic poem.
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Date: 1/4/2018 11:11:00 AM
Wonderful love poem. Enjoyed it immensely, all the lines. Very creative.
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Date: 9/15/2017 5:25:00 PM
Just love it...."Our love is like, ....." is a perfect allegory.
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