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love is like a tree its big it has branches it has its roots if a one breaks so does a branch love can be strong as a tree unless someone comes down and cut it down with a chainsaw love is tight love is amazin love is passion passion like like lust lust comes within our love our love is a big confusing circle our love is bark from a tree we hang on as strong as we can but..... when we break we break to pieces.....

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Date: 6/22/2016 11:26:00 PM
nice to see again, Arnaldo...skat
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Date: 4/18/2015 1:50:00 PM
Arnold, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/18/2015 9:21:00 AM
Arnold, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/16/2015 4:13:00 PM
I was expecting a cute love story but it ended sad... But still it is a good write! I do love the simile of "love is like a tree"! Anyway, welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you love it here as much as I do. I can't wait to read more of your pieces! <3 Tash
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