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My love for her was oh so strong; Her very love defined me; I thought our relationship would be long; Now its gone, lost like a sailor at sea. Her beauty was as a goddess; I am not sure how we even came to be; But as it turns out I was less; She got bored, went to men other than me. This act destroyed my very soul; I was crushed, heartbroken, and alone; I've gotten over this, I'm better than before; Now she's apologizing, now she wants to atone. I don't know what she thinks she sees; That miserable woman won't be getting back with me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/8/2013 11:40:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Ostin ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2013 11:36:00 AM
Hello Ostin, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/8/2013 10:11:00 AM
Ostin such a powerful and deep poem ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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