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Our Love

Feeling like I've made mistakes Like I'm breaking us apart But our love is so strong It never leaves the heart It seems we argue more In the past couple days And everytime it's over We're back to our usual ways You kiss my lips And hold my hand And everytime I still turn to sand I'm sitting here crying But I am starting to heal Your touch is what sooths me It's all i want to feel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/10/2012 12:18:00 PM
The poem depicts true love, Kelly. Written in admirable words the poem has charmed me. Great work. -Mohammad
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Date: 3/10/2012 12:17:00 PM
Great alliteration poem! I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 3/10/2012 12:10:00 PM
You will find love again Kelly.Enjoy life ! Well written poem Kelly, thank you. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/10/2012 10:50:00 AM
speaking to the abstract your state
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