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Our Love

You I'd devour, In a day or an hour. What time could you give To a man who would live Your will all at once to deflower. What of you I'd consume To hear your lips swoon From the feel of my touch to your flesh. Your scent so enticing Your lips so inviting Your heart and mine would soon mesh I want you completely Not roughly but sweetly For love is a sweet gift sublime But if passion your seeking To hear another heart's beating Is a feeling that lasts for all time So I close this poem saying That our time is so fleeting Lets not waste a moment at all For if by us it goes Then only God knows When love will for us befall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/20/2016 12:46:00 AM
David Brown, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
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Date: 5/28/2011 5:17:00 PM
very good so deep with emotions. cory
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Date: 1/7/2010 8:01:00 PM
I am so honored to be the one that you wrote this for babe..!! I love it just as much as I love you!!! Thank you sweetness!
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Date: 1/6/2010 10:13:00 PM
Very passionate write, very well written. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 1/6/2010 8:49:00 PM
I bet she would love to get your poem! Very romantic. Andrea
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