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Our Local Vampire

Had a blood sample taken by our local vampire Saw traces of blood on her teeth when she smiled She drew an extra flask For an afternoon snack She sure looked scary in her vampire attire

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Tim Smith

Date: 10/11/2016 3:31:00 PM

gonna say it what the heck...she took a bite upon your neck...it tasted sweet...oh what a treat...then to your lips she gave a peck

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/11/2016 9:08:00 AM

Vampires are overrated//often portrayed sedated//under the moon//victims swoon//in slo-mo they are mated. / No needlephobia here, I donate plasma twice a week. Rock on Jackson!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/11/2016 9:59:00 AM

YOU ARE MR. BRAVE my friend!!!!!!! Not this old duffer... lately been having my fill of doctors! Apparently, after all these tests, they have found me to a perfect specimen... could have told them that!!! LOL

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/11/2016 9:03:00 AM

Hi Jack, It's good to see you back! When I visit the local vampire I turn my head when she's drawing blood. It always seems to work for me:-) Alexis

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/11/2016 9:55:00 AM

Hello Alexis! Great idea... however, my personal vampire is sadistic! She has mirrors on all the walls! LOL Love ya... Jack xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2016 8:26:00 AM

As you know I have needle phobia but the last 6 blood tests I had been fine Jack so my recent one I went on my own!!! Absolutely fine - eat some chocolate of have something sweet to eat whilst it is being done and have a bottle to water to drink - works for me every time - tell the nurse one of your limericks when she is doing the vampire bit and you will be fine ... hubby got a blood test today - he needs 5 phials taken!!!:-( hugs jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/11/2016 8:34:00 AM

I'm not exactly wild about needles either! WHATTA WOOSIE MAN EH! Love and hugs, Jacko xxx