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Our Lives

We look at other people’s lives, So different from our own And realize no one else’s days Look like the ones we’ve known. The way we choose to spend our time, The structure of each week Can’t be compared to anyone’s, For we all are unique. Though similarities exist – We eat, we bathe, we sleep – That surface sameness skims the top While differences run deep. We’d have a lot of trouble If our lives we’d have to trade For it’s taken so much effort To create the ones we’ve made.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/15/2016 2:47:00 PM
interesting ideas here. Trevor
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Date: 8/17/2016 2:15:00 AM
Great job Ilene, would be boring if we were all the same. Regards, Craig
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Date: 8/16/2016 10:16:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Ilene. Blessings!
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Date: 8/16/2016 5:15:00 PM
I'd hate to trade places Ilene - am happy with my lot in life and the grass isn't always greener on the other side:-) hugs Jan xx
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