Our Little Bird

dropped out of your nest my daughter begs for your life love you little bird

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Patricia Leonaitis

Date: 11/24/2008 10:17:00 PM

I love Haiku. This one has perfect form and is very tender. You write with compassion. Thanks for sharing. PL

Date: 11/3/2008 5:23:00 PM

What an uplifting and heartfelt poem. A creative use of this short format. This could have more than one meeting depending on how you look at it--an asset for a short poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Blessings to you. Karen

Deneen White

Date: 9/30/2008 3:50:00 PM

I love birds, they are beautiful, I hope the bird is okay, take care D-nyce

Phebe Selby

Date: 9/30/2008 10:31:00 AM

How sweet!!! I've been here before many years ago!! What a sweet memory!! our cousins came to visit and we had a funeral for the bird we found. So little said, but yet it was so much!! sweet poetry Phebe

James Foulk

Date: 9/28/2008 8:29:00 PM

reminds me of these three little birds that the wind blew out of their nest early in the spring, but they died, real sad. this poem you wrote was a gentle piece of poetry.

Constance La France

Date: 9/28/2008 7:24:00 PM

Michael.. thanks for your comments on my poem " my beloved".. I really liked this little poem of yours.. so much in a few words.. I have one also about a goldfish.. I call it Tangle.. even the smallest creature is a gift from God and its death a sadness.. Constance

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/28/2008 5:23:00 PM

Oh my ... this one is a heart melter! What a wonderful little poem this is! ~:) Carrie

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 9/28/2008 4:30:00 PM

Michael aww so sweet I hope the little bird makes it! Laura :)

Michael Torres

Date: 9/28/2008 7:59:00 AM

These are the moments we share with our love ones that make life so special. It brings out the goodness in our hearts for hope for a defensless creature, and it touches us in the process. Nice write great thought. God bless Michael and Janice

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/28/2008 5:30:00 AM

Aww, this brings back a memory of a wounded little bird my daughter found when she was young. Brought it to the vets and left it in their care. They told me later sadly it died, but we never told her. Love, Shar