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How sullen can farewell inscribe The words untamed, the rain a bribe Like ink of hours upon our last postscript Which tumbled down softly and quickly dripped. Clearly now in the dimming afterglow, When the pale night breezes start to blow I know for sure , the thing I really miss… The purest fervor of your windblown kiss. 10.14.2018 A Poem Written in Iambic Pentameter Contest Sponsored by Janice Canerdy End rhymes checked www.rhymezome.com
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Date: 10/16/2016 1:33:00 AM
Beautiful, Nette, I love the emotion ... CayCay
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Date: 10/15/2016 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations. Love the postscript.
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Date: 10/15/2016 2:59:00 PM
Like you, I have returned for a second helping. I love this poem. nette. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:)
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Date: 10/15/2016 2:37:00 PM
NETTE, I'm sorry about the mistake!
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Date: 10/15/2016 2:35:00 PM
CayCay,, thank you for participating in the contest. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 10/14/2016 2:47:00 PM
This is lovely, dear Nette ! You always make it look easy....when for some of us it is NOT !! :)
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Date: 10/13/2016 5:33:00 PM
Beautiful. I sent you a soup mail.
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Date: 10/13/2016 4:38:00 PM
Sadly beautiful was this heart touching piece. Very nicely done Nette
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Date: 10/13/2016 3:48:00 PM
Beautifully melancholic, nette. Your poetry really blows me away!
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Date: 10/13/2016 2:46:00 PM
Sad overtones in this beautiful write
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Date: 10/13/2016 2:25:00 PM
Subtle, palpable, agonizing.I don't know what to say, actually. Woman, you brought me to my knees. Damn good poetry!
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Date: 10/13/2016 2:17:00 PM
I was moved by the subtle softness, albeit forlorn, of this piece, I love the last line.
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Date: 10/13/2016 1:40:00 PM
how romantic i loved it too .. thank you :)
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Date: 10/13/2016 1:30:00 PM
- A beautiful and touching poem, Nette - Wonderfully written, good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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