Home » Poems » Paula Goldsmith » Our Home

Our Home

Our home Is filled with thanks and love, this we got from God up above. The kitchen stove cooking away, before eating we first must pray. Let's go play on the sidewalk~talk, draw with our box of colored chalk. The fun day must come to an end, pray for family and our friend. Date Written:3/29/2022 4 Place 4. Home ~~ 8 HowManySyllables.com Form L - Lay - New Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Constance La France

Date: 4/8/2022 1:41:00 PM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your poem ~Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/9/2022 9:57:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this wonderful win in your Lay Contest. I enjoyed writing "Our Home." Have a great/blessed spring day/weekend................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2022 4:06:00 AM

Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this spiritually based winning work. Way to go. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/7/2022 12:05:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed my spiritually based write. Have a great/blessed day................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/5/2022 9:37:00 AM

Sp sweet! Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/6/2022 12:11:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great/blessed day................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/4/2022 7:06:00 AM

"filled with thanks and love" - Best of homes. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/4/2022 10:18:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. I did not know I had a win. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Wish all homes could be great but I know many are not. It is all up to the family that lives in them. Have a great/blessed day................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/3/2022 3:39:00 PM

Your home is filled with love because you live in it and have your being, I love this, have a beautiful blessed day , always Vie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/4/2022 10:10:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love this Home write. Home can be great or bad. It is all up to the family that lives in it. Have a great/blessed day................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/3/2022 11:44:00 AM

The joys of a loving, prayerful home is beautifully described in your poem, Paula. Best of wishes for the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/4/2022 10:08:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like my Home write. Have a great/blessed day................

Michael Tor

Date: 4/2/2022 7:42:00 PM

Nice write Paula...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/3/2022 7:47:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for the visit. Hope all is OK with you. Glad you like my "Our Home" write. Have a great/blessed day................

Bill Baker

Date: 4/2/2022 3:55:00 PM

Well rhymed and written my friend. Have a joyful weekend, Paula. Hugs, Bill Good luck in the contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/3/2022 7:43:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 4/2/2022 5:22:00 AM

Hello Paula, I posted my effort at a Lay this morning, went for Dream. See you employed a rhyme scheme which is a nice touch...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/2/2022 9:06:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. I will check out your page. Have a great/blessed day................

Valsa George

Date: 3/30/2022 7:19:00 PM

I can imagine how happy is that home where love and gratitude fill and where God is given a prime place !Dear Paula, best of luck in the contest.....

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/2/2022 9:05:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your best of luck. Glad you can imagine my "Our Home" write. It would be great if all homes were like this. Have a great/blessed day................

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/29/2022 8:17:00 PM

Interesting writing Paula. The words were really well chosen! and the subject is very well exposed stunningly. Good luck in the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2022 8:10:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Also thanks for your kind words. That made my day. Glad you like "Our Home" write. Have a great/blessed day................

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/29/2022 2:41:00 PM

Very sweet write Paula~ Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2022 8:07:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day................