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Our Galactic Passion

`````````````` OUR GALACTIC PASSION We are not yet one but no longer like sky’s distant two, I sense your tender skin’s pulse and feel the lips’ pull of you, And know from fire’s smoldering iris I need look no further: Orbiting closer, jeweled worlds swirl around each other Like planetessimals, no longer wanderers of ashen night, Yet charted by twined veins, twinned together by buds so tight, Gliding in space forever warmed in heaven’s embrace: A fresher paradise than that created on earth’s rockface. What existed then as a seed in your eyes faintly glowing - All around now, winds of celestial fragrance blowing; If lovers hold candles when time of after-dusk trembles Then two can be one united by stars’ and sands’ marbles, With only paradise’s soul bare as vulnerability’s essences, This gift of near-sacred vow awakens everlasting senses. So, on and on this carousel of dance and passion sustains - Leaning on your hair’s trellis, you deign a kiss that ordains A rehearsal of flamed vows for a lifetime in this bower Where fruits’ memories bathe in love's enthralling power. Our star visible to all as if multiplied nebulae are ascendant: A twin-point merging in the expanse of lit galaxies resplendent. …………………………………………………………………………. Submitted by nette onclaud Written for competition “WHAT LOVE MEANS TO YOU” written jointly by nette onclaud and sydney peck (both members of Poetry Soup)

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Date: 5/18/2011 8:24:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Walayee's fine contest Nette, way to go Princess.....:) smiles
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Date: 5/17/2011 4:36:00 PM
Great job Netty. Congratulations on your poem's honor in the winning circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/17/2011 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in Lay's contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 12:01:00 PM
congrats to both of you, great imagery and use of language in this impressive winning poem...
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Date: 5/17/2011 6:34:00 AM
Congrats to you both : )
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Date: 5/16/2011 7:00:00 PM
congrats on the win! cory
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Date: 5/16/2011 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of walayee, nette
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:51:00 PM
Congratulations to you and Syd on this fabulous collaboration's win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:28:00 PM
Congrats Nette dear on your wonderful winning poem collaboration with Syd in Lay's cool contest.. u two made a great team composing this awesome entry luv.. enjoy another top win with luv..
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Date: 5/16/2011 3:34:00 PM
Lovely... Congrats Nette! Lay
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Date: 3/18/2011 12:28:00 PM
I just can't believe how fast this week has gone by. I am enjoying reading the many magnificent poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad yours was among the ones I was able to read Nette. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with sunshine and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2011 10:11:00 AM
Oh, I love the way you described your passion and compared it to the celestial bodies in the sky. Definitely a winner, Nette. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/18/2011 4:35:00 AM
Perfect and beautiful entry ..such emotion exudes from every line luv.. and Syd is a great poet to enhance your wonderful assets too.. good luck in Lay's contest .. sheer beauty my friend... enjoyed with luv.. looking forward to your entry form "LOVELAND LIMERICK"..
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Date: 3/17/2011 11:42:00 PM
AHA, this solves a mystery I was wondering about tonight!! GReat job, you two. I bet it's going to do superbly!!
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Date: 3/17/2011 2:34:00 PM
when it's celestial alchemy, the whole universe connives! :)
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Date: 3/17/2011 1:43:00 PM
A nice enjoyable poem.. love the way love was compose scientifically by both of you... have fun and take care... good luck on the contest Nette... have a wonderful saint"patty's day...p.d.
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