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Our Future Is Now (Marvellete)

So what say ye about this night As you stand there in candlelight? In darkest shadows does love hide? Or does it glow so burning bright? As tempest heart resounds and beats Do you wander on or find retreat? For I am here, oh blushing bride, As now your shyness finds defeat. Oh come, my love, be not so coy You may just find that you’ll enjoy Do take my hand, it’s worth a try We have our passion to employ Lest not forget the reason here My love, t’is you, I hold so dear I see our future within your eyes For our love will last year after year Marvellete - my own creation - 4 verses that rhyme a,a,b,a…c,c,b,c…d,d,b,d…e,e,f,e

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/23/2008 11:22:00 AM
It's always inspiring to come upon a new form. I like the way the rhyme scheme is distributed; a nice balance between sameness and variety. And a wonderful example, inspiring. Is this the first Marvellete?
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Date: 7/23/2008 8:01:00 AM
Another of your beautiful works. And a testimony to true love..one that will last through the years. Lovely....Fondly, Carrie
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